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Option polycounter lvl 18
Ok so basically I'm gonna put all my work in here, I'll start off with a drawing I did the other night, I like it simple and effective, of my soon to be girlfriend (waiting for her to get back from 5 weeks of vacation to pick up where we left off, it's been 4 days and it's killin me already. Feel free to comment by the way.

...intuos 3 6x8
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  • Em.
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    Em. polycounter lvl 17
    The pose is nice and loose, lots of movement, but something about the proportions of the face seems off. The way the lips are wrapping around, and her right eye seems a little low and far to the right. I really like how casual she feels though.
  • Option
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    Option polycounter lvl 18
    Thanks for the good crit, I'll wait to see what a few others say before doing anything so I can tackle it all at once.
  • Oddmind
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    Oddmind polycounter lvl 17
    I like the pose, but it would work (due to the given style) to make the forshortening a bit more defined. I think a line coming from the forearm on the far right would do the trick :P, just have to fool the eye from all angles is all.
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