WIP: military chick
polycounter lvl 18
This is an older character that i decided to revive for portfolio purposes. I'd like to output to a game eventually (quake4?) but for the time being, its just for purty renders. its 6950~polyz
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but the eyes maybe too big?
yeah the eyes were something i had to address, it was late so i put it off for later. I adjusted the torso proportions and lenghtned her arms a bit.
Eyes could definitely use more work - something which I'd suggest is to move the verts of the upper eyelid forwards, so that they're further forward than the lower eyelid, it should look more natural than the shape there currently.
Also, the geometry around the nostrils is looking a little large and sharp, maybe move some verts around there to make it less obviously low-poly.
I really like the feeling of volume though, and the overall consistency is very good too.
Keep up the good work!
Maybe I'm wrong but I'd prefere his legs a little bit more large , if not for Q4 he looks fragile as child.
Don't worry about that, a 6k model is waaaaay too much for Quake 4, anyway.
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of course I agree with You - his model is already very very cool.
graves ,
I hope that You don't mind - I've done small re-touch Your picture to see about what I'm talking.
I widened his trousers - front & side
Realy nice model.
diZzyWalnut - you keep saying "he" i think its a girl :-)
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Holy shit
I've supposed that it's a boy with "angel face" - You know what I mean ?.
I'm sorry for this misunderstanding.
Excuse me once more time and last time
You know that I'm fan of Your work as "Solid Snake , Raiden or .....or ....Milla Jojovich from 5th elements."
Go on - get her into Q 4 .
Looks good, cept the face of course(Unless thats what you where going for)
Keep it up,
Alex
Possibly the reason people are getting a "manly" vibe is from the width of the neck and clavicle area - it's really beefy and nowhere near long enough. Didn't notice that till now.
Really like what you've done with the mouth though, looks nice.
the lips look very like avril lavigne. what makes her look a bit masculine is the square jaw. maybe try putting a slight dip in the bridge of the nose. also her shoulder muscles look a bit over developed. maybe lower them a bit to show a thinner neck
not sure what else you could do. she has a lot of equipment covering her femininity.
as cliche as it is, you could possibly open up her shirt more and have a bit of breast showing. not quite Eva from MGS3.. though you werent trying for that kind of look
started detailing
Your problem lies in the nose, nose bridge, and chin, and sort of in the neck. Pat attention to the shift in location of the nostrails in relation the the nosetip.
Just noticed that I think her eyes are a smidgen too wide set as well.