just doodlin' away

John Warner

oii! i did this over the past few days, off and on, and figgured i'd post the damn thing

i'm pretty happy with the black and white version, but i've got a feeling that the color version is a little messed up.. i am color blind (red-green) anyway there's all sorts of stuff borring about the color that i could fix up, but i'm getting bored with this fellow so i think i'll give him a post.


edit: my friend just told me about the eyes/lips color issues. maybe i'll go back to him later..

DeathKitten

Very cool concept John! Although he is kinda... gross I love the expression on his face.

I think his nipples should be a little more defined and tinted, although I can't quite tell from the angle of the shots.

You have such nice shoulder & arm (whats left of it anyways ) musculature, I could learn a lot from your example

Can't wait to see him tweaked up!

-DK =^..^=

swampbug

Mr warner,, kick ass.

hawken

possibly the strangest thing I've seen this week

Delaney King

me too... thats saying something!

John Warner

thanks guys i think this is the first thing i've done in 3d when i had absolutely no idea what i was making the whole time. it was a fun process, and i'm happy that it turned out to be really strange. maybe i'll try doing some more of them..

DeathKitten- you're totaly right about the nipples for sure. if i go back to him i'll nail them right out. hehe

GLandolina

haha for some reason his expression made me think "ren and stimpy" i love it

stoofoo

quite interesting! good show so far, but I gotta say, I have no idea what's going on.

Too much grey, John. Seriously, get some color into this poor fellow. Grey != shadow. Dump some blues and reds into him.

I have no idea whats going on above the clavicle(seriously, what are those folds about?) Maybe root some of that area more in anatomy study?

The grey definitely looks much better than the coloring. You've got an interesting mix of photosourcing and painting, it seems. Try and bridge the gaps a bit more, though.

Weiser_Cain

Didn't know you were colorblind, it's so weird it'd be hard to say if anything was off. His arms look delicious though.

John Warner

glandolina - thanks man

stoofoo- dude, you're totaly right. if it's one thing i really need to break down to the fundementals and re-learn, it's color.. mixing it, painting with it. gah.. it's so damn frustrating too because the only way i know i haven't colored skintone green or haven't put 200% of the redness i need in certain areas is with the eye dropper tool. i must find away around this. hehe as far as the clavicle area, yah, it's hilariously crap. i basicaly just doodled something in there. taht whole area's a little bit crazy on the model, because there's no room for the sternomastoids(?).. anyway, bleh.

i think when doing speed models you probably find out what sections you don't fully apprecieate because you graise overthem. interesting.

anyway man i apprecieate the crits. cheers.

weiser_Cain - yah, it's a tad bit frustrating hehe

adam

Jesus John put the pipe down!