Polycount - Generals - Kale

Kale

Hi all. This is my first post to the site, but after learning about the competitions, how could I resist?

CONCEPT: A general based of a race that evolved due to a thousand years of heavy animal testing on rodentia.

Basic sketch still in the works, but I think it is close enough to start modeling.

As I am kind of getting back into modeling after a bit of a haitus from any heavy modeling work, any and all feedback is welcome!

oXYnary

When are we going to see a model? I think the idea is different enough to be really fun.. Oh course, I like anthropormorphized animals..

Is that flesh peeled back on his face? Thats kinda cool. I would adjust his arms though to still be a bit longer than they are and give him really long metacarpals (palm area).

Also shorten his ears more.. He looked like a rabbit at first glance.

Kale

Yeah, it may be a bit hard to read from this sketch, but there is a second conjoined head.

The animal it is based off is called a Jerboa, but I'm taking some liberties and will probably play around with the ears and hands once I get the model built. Should have some stuff to show tomorrow.

Thanks for the input!