Crits:
- Not sure how the handle would actually display it looks too thick to work with a knockout texture or alpha?
- I would seperate the straw and place it in the model, saving a few polys.
- You might want to shave a few polys off the sides and make it more of a 6 or 8 sided object, then take those polys and better detail the handle or maybe give the foam some more depth?
- Not sure if its the straw (or pepermint stick) texture or the smoothing groups that make it look really square, you might want to make it a 5 sided cylinder and adjust the texture?
- The tip of the straw should have a black cicle, unless it isn't a straw...
Over all I like it, you did a good job on the foam texture
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Crits:
- Not sure how the handle would actually display it looks too thick to work with a knockout texture or alpha?
- I would seperate the straw and place it in the model, saving a few polys.
- You might want to shave a few polys off the sides and make it more of a 6 or 8 sided object, then take those polys and better detail the handle or maybe give the foam some more depth?
- Not sure if its the straw (or pepermint stick) texture or the smoothing groups that make it look really square, you might want to make it a 5 sided cylinder and adjust the texture?
- The tip of the straw should have a black cicle, unless it isn't a straw...
Over all I like it, you did a good job on the foam texture