WIP: Current Project

M3anBONE_sj_

Still working on this model - has a few issues here and there and slowly resolving them. Comments and suggestions would be great. Thx!

adam

Can we see the wires and texture sheet for the model? Other than the nasty seems running under her arms this model is fantastic.

JKMakowka

I would change the geometry of the elbows, as they deform pretty badly.

The rest seem to be quite nice, and the pose is great

M3anBONE_sj_

Hey, guys. Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it very much. I'm still working on the texture panels so I won't be showing those off until they're completely done. For now, here is the wireframe as requested.

shotgun

really, really, really well done.

i have noticed (also on ur website) you use a lot of white for adding light. personally i tend to avoid it, maybe give that some thought. could be just a style thing tho cuz u obviously know what u'r doing.

actually, now that i look at it, could be just a fishy max render. is that pure black in the shadows?! *gasp*

M3anBONE_sj_

I've cleaned up some of the textures for this model. I'm still adding additional details here and there - hopefully I can get this done by the end of the week so I can start on a new project.

KDR_11k

Why did you change the hairstyle?

M3anBONE_sj_

I wanted to try different hairstyles to see what fits nicely with her. I'm working on other styles which I will post up later.

JKMakowka

He obiously did, but forgot to alter the back of the head, which is too high for this kind of hairstyle.

Steakhouse

It's nice to see a femal combatant wearing enough armor to cover her vitals for a change. The whole peice has a very classy look to it.

M3anBONE_sj_

Actually, I didn't forget to alter anything with the head, I measured accordingly to the person whom I was modeling after. If it's a big distraction, I can always adjust it.

JKMakowka

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Hmm, but the leftside picture definitly seems to have a too long head with the backside higher than it should, wouldn't you agree?
Got any pictures of the reference you used?

M3anBONE_sj_

Okay, I went ahead and just lowered the back end a little and raised the frontal portion as well. As for the reference, I need to get permission from my friend whom I used as my reference. I'll keep ya posted.

JKMakowka

Looks a lot better now... no real need to ask your friend; I was simply wondering if you really have reference that looks that way (humans come in all sizes and shapes etc)

Btw, just a note on the design:
The original hairstyle seems to be much more realistic since 'open' long hair is probably pretty annoying while fighting with a sword.