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WIP - Piratey / Gypsey Girly

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Okay before anything I would like to give credit where credit is due. MoP and Tully's current CGChat contest entry inspired me to get back into working on my 3D from quite a while of not doing anything. Go-go college slacking and all. Anyways, thanks to them, I have been working on my own Pirate type Gypsy girl, and am looking for some feedback on my model and texture. Here we go:

chickwires01.jpg

chickperswip.jpg

chicktexwip01.jpg

Still working on this, but am going to take a break for some comments and crits to try to wrap this whole project up wink.gif. Thanks in advance, please, don't be polite... thrash me, it's the only way to get better. And as for style, I'm going for a World of Warcraft type feal for the texture. Thanks.

-Patrick Morrison

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  • Fordy
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    Fordy polycounter lvl 18
    Hi Dredg

    Looking good but have a couple of suggestions:

    1) the skin tone is somewhat washed out, needs some colour in there and the hands appear to be a different shade to the arms.

    2)In the 2nd picture her boots/feet look a bit too thin, perhaps widen them up a bit?
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