3d self portrait .... so nerdy pale and asskickin

warby

took about 10 hours to make in maya started with one of my template character ... ... wich i feel emberessed to admit was a chick. so after staring at the same mesh for so long i just cant see my screw ups anymore they are like predator style cloaked

thats why i need you guys ... friendly constructive criticism, raging flame, and paint-overs are highly welcome

killingpeople

looks pretty solid to me. you wear gloves? creepy. well the cheeks look weird to me, i don't know what you look like.
those forms look a little too seperated. i like your webpage interface graphics, btw.

LordScottish

Hey warbeast, I didn't know you're at polycount. Cool stuff, looks like a nice mesh to me! And if you're good at modeling yourself I'll even know how you look

Steve Schulze

Hips and to a lesser extent torso still look fairly feminine though without a nice straight orhtographic view its difficult to read the proportions all that well.

Augh

Maybe turn around the ratio of width in shoulders and hips a bit? I mean at the moment the hips being pretty wide seem to be what's causing what jackablade mentioned. Looks very good otherwise, what's with that crazy seethrough wire view btw?

Cheers.

Marine

whats with the triangles on the chest?

_Shimmer

nice warby, though stzart making good screenshots !
It seems like you have resused the hips from merylin, at least they look a bit feminie right now.

Can we see a clear wireframe for instance

bah maya bah bah bah

warby

yeah no not meryl but another female template character


and whats with the maya bashing ? cant we just all live in peace together

warby

some updated wires




... is it just me or do you all type omg insted of img when you do the tags for pictures ?

Kitteh

Wooow, amazing model! Is it me, or does it look heavily like a Star Wars Galaxies model? Not trying to imply that you stole it or anything, just an observation.

ElysiumGX

Nice A cups.

Kitteh

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Yeah.. I think it was those that made it look like an SWG model

snemmy

nah, SWG models dont have as much personality

and it looks feminine because of using good ol' femboy Leon as reference.

you have too much curve on the hip in that 3/4 shot on the right. if it's an open pocket then it might be correct. also you have your crotch setup as if you were wearing leon's rappeling harness. most male pants dont really emphasize a smooth crotch line... okay.. that's too much talking about your crotch...

kick ass model