Female goth/cyberpunk crits appreciated

gavku

Hey guys. This is a model for cgchats latest comp, which is "sexy babe with large weapon". Thought I'd post an get some crits..before I texture her.







I'll post her weapon soon...

KDR_11k

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gavku

thanks man I just got it...hahaha

Gmanx

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For a second there I thought you meant a 'LadyBoy' :P

Anyway: What pose do you have in mind for the final piece? Are you restricting yourself by modelling the arms down? It may/may not be a problem. You could probably lose a few polies in the torso (front and back) but all in all it's a nice mesh. Do you have a poly limit? I'm wondering if the hands could be a little poly heavy.

gavku

No pose that was how i drew the concept. Actualy rotating the arms up a bit at the mo. 3500 tri's for character and weapon. Want the character to sit at around 3000, she's a bit over this at the moment. Yeah I thought maybe the hands were a bit heavy. Thanks.

jzero

I'd give her a slimmer waist, accentuate the hips. I like the way her torso curves down to the pelvis, but I'd make that even more pronounced, so you get a nice sexy 'miniskirt zone'. Very important on Goth chicks!

/jzero

skankerzero

everything jzero said and give that hand / wrist some volume.

hawken

um. her torso looks like a tree trunk. I don't know how I can make that sound better. Try some definition, for a laugh

gavku

Thanks guys...i probably try an sas her up a bit. Want to try an stay away from the cliched, large breast and bubble butt look..(not that there's anything wrong with that..haha). Definately more volume on the hands, can't belive I missed those.

gauss

use reference. reference reference reference.

warby

hey turn her into aeonflux the hair is allready almost there