My Shotgun for a mod...

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It's sort of, kind of based off a mossberg variant, but most of it is my own creation. Pump Action type. Tris:2413
3-4+ point polys:1133, I still need to add a pump and a trigger/trigger guard.

PaK

wireframe plz

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Wires as requested...

Mr Ray

Just take some prnt screens from your 3d program. Thos kind of wire renders are crap,it's just a bunch of lines overlapping..

killingpeople

ya, use the same angles you used for your original renders.

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new wires...

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cholden

What is the shotgun for, a game mod or to look at? I agree with everyone on your images, tough to crit.
At a glance, your model seems boxy for the tri count. You're using them on a lot of tiny details instead of enhancing the overall shape. It seems a bit slammed together, as in the pieces don't flow smoothly. The barrel seems skinny. Shotguns have that thick wide barrel all the way down. Also, you say it's pump action, but I don't see that. I see a bolt, though I admit having limited experience handling shotguns.

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And yeah, I just noticed the angles comment after I posted the new wires. Unfortunately I had to go with my dad to storage to get some stuff, so I couldn't render out some new wires. Sorry.

hawken

wheres the "pump"

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People this really isn't that hard, I STILL NEED TO ADD ONE!!!

Jesus, thats like the 2nd post that obviously wasn't needed because I stated in my original post that it wasn't done and that I still need to add one. I am still deciding on how it should look as a cylindrical one would be rather boring.

hawken

wheres the "action"?

LazyBoy

ummmm

what did you make that shotgun with

Maya, Max, lightwave, Softimage

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Lightwave v 8.3

LazyBoy

man i know all 3d programmes can make great stuff but lightwave seems to be quite a good programme

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I love it,it's very organized, everything is where it should be and its not cluttered at all (for a 14 year old like myself thats a great help, a lesson Max could do with) and the renderer is great (but Lightwave 9 is where the real actions gonna be, a rewrite of the raytracer and most of the renderer, as well as huge updates to the main core of the program.)