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Fortune Teller

WinglessXAngel
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WinglessXAngel polycounter lvl 18
I just finished this

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  • rooster
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    cool, don't know If I'd call it finished yet though. I think your lighting is nice but rather flat, a bit too even across the guy and curtains. Also his fingers look..broken. I would construct a simple hand in 3d out of boxes in the rough position you want, and see how it looks using the same perspective as your picture. I'd say the hands and then the lighting are the most important things that need fixing atm, keep it up though its almost there!
  • Quasar
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    Quasar polycounter lvl 19
    I hope you don't mind, but here's a quick paint-over I did to demonstrate how you can make the lighting more dynamic.

    fortune.jpg

    Keep up the good work, you've got something neat here!
  • Mark Dygert
    I like it alot, lets see more =)

    Quasar, not a big fan of the drapes in the paint over. I suggest not useing white as a highlight color, use a lighter shade of the base color. I understand its a quick paint over so I shall not slight ya that much for it =P And the work you did on the main character illustrates the point really well, but those drapes... gahh...
  • Quasar
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    Quasar polycounter lvl 19
    haha...yeah, my bad smile.gif
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