Dystopia Character
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Hi guys and gals
Im working on a player model for Dystopia hl2.. cept im running low on ideas for the texture
Heres a few shots of my progress so far:
Poly count on the model is 4238.
My aim is to make him a hard ass cyber punk, so if you guys could give me crits or suggestions that would be great!
edit: arm tats are only temp, messing with them
, supposed 2 be a circuitry theme.
Im working on a player model for Dystopia hl2.. cept im running low on ideas for the texture
Heres a few shots of my progress so far:
Poly count on the model is 4238.
My aim is to make him a hard ass cyber punk, so if you guys could give me crits or suggestions that would be great!
edit: arm tats are only temp, messing with them
, supposed 2 be a circuitry theme.
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keep up that fine texture work and I think you'll have yourself a high grade quality player model.
I like his proportions a lot..
I just think, at least the way he's rendered, kinda looks like he's gonna tumble backwards. Might wonna check the posture.
Ok, you have taken so far a very techniqual route on this guy. With your abilities I think you can make it a wonderufl model - if you push his character more. Focus on the design and less on the tatoos.
Post here his personality, his background, his hobbies, his favorite music, anything you feel creating in him. Preferably beyond "bad ass cyborg".
But no matter what, you must kill, at once, the "scar" tatoo around his eye. Or else, quite simply, you will die!
I hate it. looks like ass, you should be ashamed of yourself!
;D
ok now seriously, Lookin good man. hehe get one of thoes concept artists to draw you something up.
Model wise it's very nicely done, but he looks like he needs to have a little more bulk in the hips/arse/thigh area, as the transition between the torso and the legs is very straight up and down. I realise it's a fine line between making him have womanly hips, but I think you've gone too far the other way. You are very close though. Finish it up
n30 -
Cheeseonbannanas - I'm attempting to do and its looking alot better, thanks! ill keep on adding randomness 2 the face.
the scar tattoo was removed ;D, the tat there atm is just something temp, caliban (dude from dystopia) came up with yet another tat which i will put on after i go 2 kfc!
enough babbling
shadows under the neck
and those wrists look to skinny to have straps around them chink it upa little
better than i could do tho and u know it
edit: son of a.... damn i need to read stuff b4 i post i bet i missed like 10 things this time as well
Jody
Really digging the armour on his torso.
Maybe it would look cool to have the same kind of tattoo that he has on his arms come up on his neck from under the armour.
lkraan: omg best idea ever! I'll do that when i get home from work 2night
funny thing is, I took the day off work 2 finish it and by the time i usually would have been home from work i had 2 start from where i did that morning >_>;
crits more than welcome!
the only thing that irks me is the pink shoes, I would have gone with the darker purple instead but its up to you. Maybe try alternating one section dark purple and the other (like the toe of the shoe) pink or something, see how it looks.
looks like it could fall off by shaking his head a little.
i'd add something to keep the mask in place.
and the sown up mouth just looks completely out of place.
oh and with the shoes i think the color being the same is fine, but right where that line is if you make it look like another plate going across the top of his foot by adding a drop shadow i think it'll add alot of depth to the entire foot.
The only thing I like about this are the hands and the skin tones.
8-)
Looking really nice man. I think you could use a bit more localized damage as he looks a bit pristine at the moment. Good work though.