Kingdom Hearts sora

Enix

Umm..yea, just started it yesterday, and slaped on a skin today. Its at 2024 polys. And i dont know why i did it...i want to start my own concepts, but unfortunatly i dont have a scanner or a tablet, so im own of luck for now. Untill i get a scanner, i will just keep doing characters i already know :P. Its good practice i guess. Anyway, here it is:



I will show wires and stuff later, i need some crits, his structure is all messed up.

Steakhouse

Looks pretty acurate. My only gripes would be the head and the hands but then I cant totally tell without a front, back, side to judge from. His hands are pretty damn big in the game, and his head is pretty round too.

Empty

Man I love that game. Probably one of my favorite games of all time.

The models looking good but the color seems a bit off at places, that may just be the lighting though.

The the yellow and silver on his shoes just look like they have to much white in them... And the blue straps


Still looking great.

Enix

What i did for skin refs, was i have the video game, and i hooked it up to my video card, and i can take screen caps. And since the area of where i took the screen caps was like a desert [the collosium entrance btw], its a little brownish in the areas its supposed to be grey. Thanks for pointing that out to me , i will fix that asap.

[and i will post some front, side and back pics in a few, i hate opening max, it takes forever :P.]

Enix

As you can see from the front view, it looks really out od shape, but i can't put my finger on what exactly is wrong.

Jerome

his sleeves 'flare' out at the end and so do his pants i think

Nakur

Yep, his clothing just isn't "poofy" enough.

Steakhouse

The jacket also flares out and away from the body if you look closely. The pants come down further over his knees and his upper legs arent quite as long as you've made them. Finally his caves flare outward more toward the knee.

Enix

Yea, i see what ya mean, hows this?

Jerome

his jacket isn't there yet

Cubik

More flare. The blues on his gloves and belt needs to be more saturated, check the posted pic. The folds on his pants are a little too big and sharp, make them more smooth. You have missed the indent in his soles. Needs thicker caves. Missed (or haven't started on) the zipper. His upperarms looks a little thin and his throat a little too thick. Make the pants bigger and baggier. Don't forget the pockets on the texture.

Good start, keep at it.

pairorat

Not a bad game and not a bad mdel recreation, but i think his calves need just a bit more shape to them. Also i think he two center spikes in his hair need to go a little more vertical aswell ashis head may need to be a skosh bigger but way to go so far man, keep it up.

Enix

Mkay, i flared the jacket out and fixed his calfs. Now im focusing on the head, maybe you can help with the flow, its pretty basic atm :S.



I Need to remodel the nose :P.

JKim3

I dunno how accurate you're going to try to be, but here's a pic for you.

http://rpgfan.com/pics/kh/art-render-face-01.jpg
http://rpgfan.com/pics/kh/art4.html

Look at the Facial Animation pic of Sora.