New head.... Again....
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So im liking it so far, except is seems pretty boring to me now after look at it for so long... If anyone has any ideas on maybe features to exagerate or things like that to make it look more interesting let me know.
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i will see this again
because i do it often myself,
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the its-way-too-high-foo forehead mistake! yay!
thing is,
it kinda looks like you actually took off a piece of her jaw bone, where more of her chin should be showing, and stuck it on her top
sculpy style
although ive been guilty of doing the same thing
Where is it?
She's got a Michael Jackson nose.
The back of her skull comes way to far down into the neck,
she has a real fat puffy bottem lip, looks like someone slugged her in the face. Her ears are so squashed on the side profile.
I'd love to quote a beatles song here, but I feel it's unnesary.
I feel these are pretty harsh crits
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Uh, oh yea, she looks pretty good.
And heres a perspective shot too, the other models i've done lately i modeled pretty much with perspective off and they dont look right any other way than that, this one actually looks more "right" with perspective on so thats good.
its gonna get pretty tight in there if you try fit a skull inside that model.. no room!
just imagine what would happen if someone farted!
lower the ears too, a little. your reference shot has slight from-below prespective.
Chin and head match the ref, spot on.
Sometimes I see people getting a little carried away with certain proportion perfection, and they lose sight that the human head is rarely "perfectly" proportioned. Sure, there may be an "average", but the Proportion Nazis would have believing that there is a specific formula in which you should make your head.
I don't have any crits on the mesh flow, one way or another.
Anyways move the jaw and corner of the mouth forward, the tip of the nose should be much "fatter" from the side view, i dont know why you modeled eyebrows (i would get rid of them).
I think the lip area is protruded half an inch too forward, almost like babboon faces(no offense, just trying to make a decent observation).
Eye detail is solid though and beautiful neck line.
Other than that, the mouth is way to strait and lacks shape. A good way of actually changing it is to model with the inside of the mouth, or at least with a start of it. That way you will model the sides of the lower lip actually going inside of the mouth a bit.
Oh and of cause the always common "outer corner of the eye" problem. The upperlit doesn't quite merge with the lower lit in a loop, but the loop goes more like back to the ear... hard to explain.
And yes i noticed back of her skull is WEIRD but the hair isnt done anyways, maybe some day...
JK: Ok, fixed up that area on the nose and ill add an inside to the mouth later too.
Dont really feel like posting new pics since its just small changes.
that looks pretty damn good toomas, just gotta fix up that akwardly shaped skull hehe, also if you posted a wire shot that might be pretty usefull to me, thanks =D
she is very distinctive .
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indeed.
http://www.awfulplasticsurgery.com/archives/005430.html
My suggestion to to go a lot further in finding reference . sometimes a photo can be deceiving unless you compare it with a lot of other similar ones.I use 3/4 views a lot as this can show up a lot of mistakes in your model
Thoses are Sick sexy head!
b1ll
You (should) have learned by now that refernces can be misleading, and that proportions are a lot more imoprant that getting the eye lid detail. You've mixed so much "paint" into this one, you probably never get the "color" right. Best to start fresh.
Yup, borb's heads have good propotions.
fight fight fight