[HEAJ] UT Creature

chikaka

Hello all
this is my second character this year.
polycount max 3000-3500.
pleas comment it

lkraan

I like the idea for the detail (padding/crest thing) on his torso but I would make it a bit bulkier and sticking out more. Right now it's pretty flat on his body and then you might as well lose some polys and create that detail in the skin.

From the angle view the profile of his head doesn't look right. Too flat and slanted I think. You can also make his head a bit wider (looking at the side/angle view).

I assume that the boots are also still a WIP but they look a little bit boring and straight. Maybe try to give it more shape to make it follow the shape of the lower leg.

MAUL0r

give the poor guy a nose! or a hint of where a nose might have been!

this is one of the more preportionate models from HEAJ lately btw...

chikaka

here i post the concept of my character, perhaps that explaine some of my choice.
but it's not finish

Spinks

you might want to make that picture a bit smaller, i can only fit half of it on my screen.

notman

I like the concept. There seems to be some proportion issues with it, so I wouldn't use it as a direct reference, which it doesn't look like you did