Urban Artest Crit Please

Conceptmaker

Any comments, ideas, critisism for this piece would be most appreciated before I send this off to a company.

7000 max polys, 500k texture limit

Steakhouse

That's pretty damn good. Where are you at in your polys and texture space?

Conceptmaker

6800tris, 465k, any ideas on more detail places?

EarthQuake

Hey i think i remember brome doing this same art test a few months ago, is this for violition? Or was it some other company...

Bronco

LOL earthquake I was just gonna say the same thing....

I like the difference instyle as well from Adams,his was uch cleaner while yours is much grittier,Im thinking a murder scene from CSI:New York or soemthing.

I think you could do with sharpening up the wall textures some more,not too sure how you would go about doing that though...I just feel the outline of the bricks need more definition a sthey seem quite blurry.

Apart from that I really like it.

Good job

john

Conceptmaker

Yea, Volition, anything I should know about them?

qubism

i recommend making one material darker than the rest. and a fix point for the eye.
atm its all one big value in brightness so it all melts to one together i think. something different than grey might be cool too. not sayin u should make it colorfull. just add some saturationand one two spots of color more.

lkraan

I like the mood and detail of the scene.

lol @ "non vegetarian food" sign

Everything looks pretty used and dirty but the garbage can looks brand spanking new. I would add some dirt/scratches/rust to it.

The left side of the building (looking at the first screenshot) doesn't show any bricks but the brown/white texture. I think that I would like to see a bit of brick in that wall too like you did with the right side of the building (maybe less brick than that wall, but some).