What do u think is missing?

JesterBox

The reason im posting this is because i wanted some feed back. Ive posted some concept art of a charecter im going to to for unreal2004. To me it seems like he's missing somthing espeacialy on the back. There are three things i was thinkin of there to. Oh and plz excuse me for the sloppyness of the drawing (there not even inked) but thier just sketch art. thnk u.

rooster

sorry for being a pedant but I love that you used two different spellings of 'they're' and neither is right

As for the sketch I personally don't think it needs something on his back, if it looks boring I'd just put some kind of detail into the texture there.
Maybe pulling his upper body weight back a bit would fix your problem?

edit: yeah actually go the stuffed penguin

Steve Schulze

Go the stuffed penguin. You know you want to.

Sett

Jesters always seem to have a stick with a jester's head on it.

You could have two of them strapped to his back, one happy, one sad.



Or the penguin.

usagi

tahts a pretty good idea, it could be a staff... and electric of course

GoK

My vote is with the "booster thin" (is that like waight watchers?) ?? or the stuffed penguin whatever!

Jody

JesterBox

well yea my grammer is that of a monkey. Anyway everyone seems to be going with the penguin i did like the suggestion bout the smily/happy face too. I didnt mean to make him lean so far forward but i had no eraser and i was to lazy to start over. But now im thinkin ill stik the penguin on the side of his hip and go with the booster *thing, sry bout that. i was thinkin of a color set mianly of like a burgundy red and a semi dark green. If u have any more suggestion id be happy to here them thx