It seems alright that you are using photo's for reference, but you just seem to be drawing in the outline of the figure. Maybe start putting in the actual construction lines in and build up what's going on inside the lines. Thatway they won't look so bloated because they don't have any ribs or stomach lines.
I like the one on the right. I'm not a fan of ridiculous hair styles. But i think her breasts are too high. Maybe she's young, so it's possible. There's no limit to the deviations in breast development. Artists love it. But maybe it's the perkiness that throws it off. I like the natural waistlines.
Nice DD-cups, Rockstar! Thanks for not doing the usual "supermodel on roids with implants" thing. They are 'all woman'! If it weren't for the hairstyles, I'd say they were Lane Bryant models. I don't usually associate the 'neonazi goth' style with full-figured women, though. Those are usally crack-addict skinny. But I'm not gonna crit your style choices, I just want to see this develop.
I think you need some darker shadows on the color versions. They look well-lit, but I think there should be some strong shadows on the undersides of their, uh, limbs. Go man, go!
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Nice DD-cups, Rockstar! Thanks for not doing the usual "supermodel on roids with implants" thing. They are 'all woman'! If it weren't for the hairstyles, I'd say they were Lane Bryant models. I don't usually associate the 'neonazi goth' style with full-figured women, though. Those are usally crack-addict skinny. But I'm not gonna crit your style choices, I just want to see this develop.
I think you need some darker shadows on the color versions. They look well-lit, but I think there should be some strong shadows on the undersides of their, uh, limbs. Go man, go!
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And they're natural ;o . Gotta love boobies, very nice .
Only one crit, they need nipples .Right now they have the base nipple :O, but no nipple, nipple.
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He's not the only one that said Natural either. Dunno about you, but I used to date a nice figured Goth type woman awhile back when I was -your- age. No crack smoking, bong hittin for her. Dunno where you were going on that one Not meant to flame just wondering where you got these opinions from?
a little heavier than I like, but very realistic, though I'd stuill leave some indicatons of there the ribcage ends and the illiac crest of the pelvis begis, right now they look a little unfeatured in the torso.
Really nice line work, you need to clean up some lines and get the in/outs of the lines cleaned up mostly on the arms. The breasts on all three are beautiful; they have weight, mass and flow over the chest nicely. Great job with the shading of the breast.
The middle females belly buttons position bothers me as it looks too far left. I think you a slight under belly shade to indicate that she has put on a little pounds.
Looks nice man. I don't like the way you do that airbrush skin. It is a cool effect at times, but as a general way to make skin it's too metallic. They look like they are made out of aluminum. I dig the hairdos.
the shading is just something I did just for the hell of it, and yeah I was aiming for that quick shiny look, rather than doing something realistic with it.
stay tuned for the next batch of "different" looking chicks.
well we know whats on your mind Mr. Rockstar.....looks good, i'm also very happy that it's not the cliche hero giant boobs girl...how you been, still doing freelance?
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lookin pretty good though who can turn down boobies
Only one crit, they need nipples .Right now they have the base nipple :O, but no nipple, nipple.
My favorite is the 'punkish' style girl.
I love the rendering in the colored version, Rockstar.
eta harasho
ya hachu eta boobski spajalsta
I think you need some darker shadows on the color versions. They look well-lit, but I think there should be some strong shadows on the undersides of their, uh, limbs. Go man, go!
/jzero
Nice DD-cups, Rockstar! Thanks for not doing the usual "supermodel on roids with implants" thing. They are 'all woman'! If it weren't for the hairstyles, I'd say they were Lane Bryant models. I don't usually associate the 'neonazi goth' style with full-figured women, though. Those are usally crack-addict skinny. But I'm not gonna crit your style choices, I just want to see this develop.
I think you need some darker shadows on the color versions. They look well-lit, but I think there should be some strong shadows on the undersides of their, uh, limbs. Go man, go!
/jzero
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And they're natural ;o . Gotta love boobies, very nice .
Only one crit, they need nipples .Right now they have the base nipple :O, but no nipple, nipple.
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He's not the only one that said Natural either. Dunno about you, but I used to date a nice figured Goth type woman awhile back when I was -your- age. No crack smoking, bong hittin for her. Dunno where you were going on that one Not meant to flame just wondering where you got these opinions from?
Scott
The middle females belly buttons position bothers me as it looks too far left. I think you a slight under belly shade to indicate that she has put on a little pounds.
the shading is just something I did just for the hell of it, and yeah I was aiming for that quick shiny look, rather than doing something realistic with it.
stay tuned for the next batch of "different" looking chicks.
Good form.
nice to see something a little different. nice job, obviously.
shotgun doesn't speak any language, nothing he sais ever makes any sense, I have no idea how he survived up to this point.