Jeff The Crocodile

Showster

Something I wipped up in an hour or so the other day, pretty cartoony going to be for a jungle project.
The game isn't real time so theres no polycount although I'm trying to get it reasonable since I have to render lots of videos.





The tail proportions are probably off for a croc but hopefully that shudn't matter "too" much.

I'm trying to texture this little thing at the moment but thats another story...

ideas and comments anyone??

regards

Voodoo

The front feet look a little funky and I'm missing the twin ridges of scales that run down the back/tail

EmAr

I think the gingiva should be smaller leaving more space to the teeth. And I would make the jaw smaller. Just my ideas though...

Mojo2k

the body and the style is looking cool, but the teeth just look way wrong, i would advise hunting down some ref images, and use that as a guide

Showster

thanks for the comments guys I'll get to them as soon as I can

HonkyPunch

seeing as crocs are one of my favorite animals.... i have to say it's lookin' pretty good.

Badge

hmm, its got the stance of a croc, but the snout is def alligator. make it more narrow and longer. hes got a very big gut. crocs are usually slender compared to alli's, but from the last shot i think the needs to lose a bit of weight so to speak :P

i kinda like the texture. but it doest say "amphibious reptile"

i think crocs are more green than brown, i may be wrong, but try to get some scales in there instead of bumps and stuff, and youll be straight )

Steve Schulze

More of a slate grey with a mottling of darker coloured scales. I rather like what you've got there though. No need to stcik to close to reality on a cartoonish styled beasty.

Showster

blade thats helped me a bunch actually I cudn't decide on what hues to use for the croc,,, its gone from vibrant green, to a dull yellowy brown,, but yea I agree on the whole grey / slatey colour.... thats what I was missing :-D

I'll try my best to adopt some of the proportion fixes

thanks guys