Low-poly art WIP
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Hi guys.
I have some free time and i decided to redo some of my recent work. There are thing to improve on the texture, so it's WIP now. He's for RTS game, 1500 tris.
Any suggestions will be appreciated.
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I have some free time and i decided to redo some of my recent work. There are thing to improve on the texture, so it's WIP now. He's for RTS game, 1500 tris.
Any suggestions will be appreciated.
Wire:
Textured:
Render:
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But i had problems with hosting pictures. i'll setup my personal server soon.
2:> the knees are WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY too low, your thighs are huge, and your calfs are tiny as hell, fix that
3:> ok this i think is the biggest complaint (in preference) with the model i have. In the concept, the shadow of the helmet made it looks like they are wearing shades (which i thought they were) and now i realize thats not true. I think they look better if they had shades in the shape of the shadow, becuase your soldier looks too friendly ATM. If you take view away from his eyes, he looks more militaristic (is that even a word?)
4:> Can i have a render of him with his arms at his sides? or at least at a 45º angle? I cant really tell if his arms look correct. In the concept his shoulders are dropped and relaxed, and yours arnt. It takes A LOT of character out of him if his shoulders are dropped...he just looks so much more badass that way. I also cant tell if the shoulders, bicept, and forearm are at the right "buff" level. It's also hard to tell if his arms are in close enough to his body. I also believe his hands arent bit enough
besides all that, its a great model, and awesome skin. very simple, yet original idea
Shoulder straps have too many horizontal lines, causing the dithering error you see in your renders. Again, it's detail dropping this close imagine the RTS camera, what you'll have there is a muddy blur.
What happened to his helmet? Even in the distant profile in the left background of the concept it has all that shape and detail. You have translated that to a sphere with a hole for the face cut out.
The character strays way too far from the concept. I honestly think it should be remodeled, and posed with weapon like the concept to show you're serious about the art test. As far as a "for fun' model, it's pretty nice.
Btw, they gave me just that one sketch, and it's hard to orient on it..
If you look at this image, you will see the human head is much more square.
You seem to have gone for a more realistic but I like the comic look and proportions of the concept drawing.
Rick, is that pic from your San Andreas reference collection?