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IceWolve
IceWolve
polycounter lvl 18
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IceWolve polycounter lvl 18
Well, it's not a complete soldier yet, but a start. This is the head so far, and i need lots and good crits and comments to make it better, and let it use the polies more efficiently. Mainly crits on the edge loops.

So take out your crit sledge hammer and start pounding!

head_ortho_smooth_02.jpghead_ortho_wire_02.jpg

Here is the helmet so far.
helmet_ortho_wire_01.jpg
images shoudl work now
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  • Daz
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    Daz polycounter lvl 18
    Cool. The face is too dense so it's holding you back I think. If you much simplify the topology you have there, it will be easier. In the 3/4: that area above the brow is a bit neanderthal. You could push that back a bit I think. Lower lip seems to just out. Front top of head looks a little square. Keep at it. It's aesthetically not bad at all, but topologically isn't making much sense. Search this page and steal a look at some of bills wires.
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  • EarthQuake
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    All im getting is the helmet, the head isnt showing up for me.
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