[Feedback] Game Art - Mid Poly Truck - feedback appreciated

Adam_Kass

Hello, I'm new to Polycount so I hope I'm doing this feedback thing right

Recently I applied for a 3D Artist job and I had to do this assigment: creating a mid poly ( under 20k tris) 3D model of Peterbilt Cabover truck with Diffuse, Roughness and Metallic maps for a mobile game. I ultimately didn't get the offer, so I'd love to hear your critique and feedback on this model and maybe some recommendations on what areas I should improve in or spend more attention on.

Here are some final renders in Blender:

Here are some topology screenshots from Blender:

Material view from Blender:

Diffuse / Roughness / Metallic map:

Link to post on Artstation if anyone is interested: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/a0vyzk

Thank you for reading through this post and again, if you have any feedback, I'd love to hear it

sacboi

Nice, I've no crits other than using a path tracer for your final renders instead of a rasterizer possibly EEVEE Next, just wondering is all?

iam717

final renders in Blender:

Cool truck, congrats on the piece.

Araka

This is super cool !

I’m not as experienced with game assets, so I won’t comment on the technical details, and I don't know about the pitch. But maybe it could use a little more "dirt" ? It could be subtle, just some noise effects in the roughness and metallic  maps?