Character Practice – Personal Training Project

Fenrirk5

This character was created as a personal test and training project.

The main goal was to practice and improve my skills in character modeling, focusing on anatomy, proportions, clothing details, and overall silhouette.

This is not a final production asset, but part of my continuous learning process. Any feedback or critiques are very welcome and appreciated, as they help me grow as a 3D artist.

Eric Chadwick

Looks good so far. The image is kind of low-resolution. It would be nice to have some closeups of various parts.

iam717

Well time to strip!

Hi there.

I'd like to believe this is a great resource for anatomy things if your covered up model needs it at all:

https://www.artstation.com/anatomy4sculptors

"focusing on anatomy"

Clothing: (random but informative find) youtube link.

Armor: (people find these useful) YT link.

C&c:

Looks alright, img is too dark for my old eyes, perhaps some lighting guides? (random light link found seems a good starting point) YT.  (This monitor might be bad so perhaps you have a better one.)

Hair: (seems like the hair you might be going for all "settings" can be used in your application of choice more or less) YT.

Hope these help, since it seems this is still a sculpt you are in a great spot to utilize these helpful guides, until then what Eric says is true if you aren't willing (and i can get why) to share each piece individually in an organized layout the illustrates and shows off the designs you are making in 100% clarity we can't do much on our end. 

 (i tried to help with what was supplied.)

Do what i did below with the head references guides to a "popular appealing design", and see where they land if you can find a good front view/ect.

Hope any of this helps, if you feel this is a lacking reply in anyway, its usually cause no one comes back or its a quick thanks, so no real "community feel", to the effort put into the "assistance" given.

This still took some time & i actually tried to be quick with it & it didn't work.

Edit: came back

Seems your lighting is alright i checked it on another p.c. otherwise what are your general goal for this other than, "part of my continuous learning process".

Also what outside sources, applications, premade assets did you utilize for any of this?

Fenrirk5

iam717 said:

Well time to strip!

Hi there.

I'd like to believe this is a great resource for anatomy things if your covered up model needs it at all:

https://www.artstation.com/anatomy4sculptors

"focusing on anatomy"

Clothing: (random but informative find) youtube link.

Armor: (people find these useful) YT link.

C&c:

Looks alright, img is too dark for my old eyes, perhaps some lighting guides? (random light link found seems a good starting point) YT.  (This monitor might be bad so perhaps you have a better one.)

Hair: (seems like the hair you might be going for all "settings" can be used in your application of choice more or less) YT.

Hope these help, since it seems this is still a sculpt you are in a great spot to utilize these helpful guides, until then what Eric says is true if you aren't willing (and i can get why) to share each piece individually in an organized layout the illustrates and shows off the designs you are making in 100% clarity we can't do much on our end. 

 (i tried to help with what was supplied.)

Do what i did below with the head references guides to a "popular appealing design", and see where they land if you can find a good front view/ect.

Hope any of this helps, if you feel this is a lacking reply in anyway, its usually cause no one comes back or its a quick thanks, so no real "community feel", to the effort put into the "assistance" given.

This still took some time & i actually tried to be quick with it & it didn't work.

Edit: came back

Seems your lighting is alright i checked it on another p.c. otherwise what are your general goal for this other than, "part of my continuous learning process".

Also what outside sources, applications, premade assets did you utilize for any of this?

Thank you very much for the feedback and for sharing these resources, it really helped.

The notes about anatomy and lighting were especially useful, and I’ll keep them in mind moving forward. This piece is still part of my learning process, so comments like this make a big difference.

Thanks again for your time and help!