Looks good in general, but the one thing that stands out immediately to me are the finger bones in the wings. They are clearly meant to be finger bones and it's not unusual for them to be slightly deformed, crooked or at different angles from each other, but in this case, I think it's just too much and the resulting overall impression is that of pretty mangled and formless tubes.
Looks good in general, but the one thing that stands out immediately to me are the finger bones in the wings. They are clearly meant to be finger bones and it's not unusual for them to be slightly deformed, crooked or at different angles from each other, but in this case, I think it's just too much and the resulting overall impression is that of pretty mangled and formless tubes.
Fair point I didn't give them enough attention on the first one
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And here is the new topo wip
Will help the new one