Modern Tomboy-ish Zelda [WIP/Critique Welcome!]

jeffxfcVA

Currently creating another anime model, since I'm going to Japan in two months. Hopefully, I can impress my Japanese nephews with my models!

jeffxfcVA

1st pass of the clothing done.

Alemja

I think the wrinkles around the elbow folds read rather oddly. I think what's doing it is the sim is working with the A pose, but it's not how folds would work on someone who is wearing and moving in it. I also wonder if the folds on the hoodie overall make it feel like it's a light weight fabric, totally fine if that is what you're going for, but I think it could be more interesting if it was a bit thicker and more structured

jeffxfcVA

kanga

Looks great! Only crit would be the sleeve folds.

A MD example below.

BlueChaos

I think the hair brings down the rest of the piece, could be cool to have a look at some nice stylised refs like this or this :]  at the moment it kinda just feels like mushed up clay to me. I also don't quite like the lips either because they don't match the rest of the stylisation, but that's probably just subjective (If it were just me, I'd smooth them down).

Loving the sweater though!