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[WIP] Major Motoko Kusanagi - Ghost in the Shell 1995

So I started this project a few months ago in order to fully follow a AAA character production from scratch. My computer not being that powerful, I sort of started off at a PS4-like objective in quality, with options to upscale it with a subdivision later to match today’s standards.

For now, I have done the sculpt, the retopology, the UVs and the first iteration on texturing. I am now working on a rig to be able to pose and animate her. On the rails there is hair with xGen with both hair cards and strands, as well as the clothes with Marvelous (and the resculpt, retopo and skinning of the clothes...). I am already around 80 hours of work, rigging not included.

Topology around 30k tris


UV maps split on UDIMS

Close up on the face topology

Close up on the face rendered with 1 subdivision level


Body rendered with 1 subdivision level

Back view of the body with one subdivision level

So far I am very happy with how the topology went out and the texturing is decent, but it still feels a bit blotchy and undetailed. I wonder if it would be worth doing a higher resolution resculpt to add more detail to the face and have slightly crisper normals, but that might be overkill for something that is supposed to be a game asset at the end?

In terms of art direction, I really wanted to stick as close as humanly possible to the physical traits of the Major as depicted in Mamoru Oshii’s film. Her physical features are a blend of Olympics athletes and Brooke Shields, whom I found to have very similar traits. For the carnation I went closer to Carrie Anne Moss and Juliette Binoche. During the entire process I had the original concept arts and screenshots of the film to maintain continuity in reference.

I guess I could use some feedback regarding the texturing in particular. I feel like it still can be improved, but is it really worth it?

You’re welcome to comment or make any other remark! I am fairly new to this type of 3D modelling and it is the first time I am using Maya as well, as Blender has pretty severe limitations in optimizing texture space.

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  • exitshadow
    After wrestling with xGen for a long moment, I managed to give her decent brows and eyelashes. It was difficult to maintain conformity with the reference since it is an anime, so I did my best to rearrange it in a way that still feels credible in a photorealistic style. What was hardest was to maintain a very thin brow line without it looking it weird. Sometimes this job feels like being a virtual beautician, my mom would be proud of me.


    The references:

  • exitshadow
    Now working on the shaggy hair style. It not that of an easy groom as there is a lot of clumping and intersecting hair, but I’m trusting it will go well at the end. Spent around 5 hours just getting around xGen’s quirks as anything set wrong will make the entire project crash. Now the setup works well.


  • exitshadow
    So, after many adventures, I managed to make some hair that looks possible while respecting the original character design. It was really complicated to find the sweet spot in the middle.




    And a render for good measure:


    Now obviously with the ray traced render of marmoset I can tell that the texture feel vastly insufficient for a close up like this. Maybe the lashes would deserve to be denser or thicker too. Otherwise I am reasonably happy with the groom and am in good hopes it will export well in Unity.
  • vavavoom
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    vavavoom greentooth
    I think it's a really tough thing to pull off having enlarged eyes on a real-life styled character.
    If not done 'right' I think it tends to look freaky and unsettling...
    I'm not sure adding those huge eyes onto Carrie-Anne Moss' face works so well without at least giving her some degree of stylization to help blend them together... 
    So i guess my advice would be to push for more stylized facial features that help work the size of the eyes better with the rest of the face.
    Right now, there appears to be a disconnect between the realistic face and the huge eyes.
    I wish I could be more helpful and give more technical suggestions on how this could be achieved better, but i can only give my critique on how it looks to me.
    I think the 'Alita' movie did a good job of achieving this kind of thing and managed to pull it off well.

    Again, I think it's a really tough challenge and look forward to seeing how you progress :)
  • exitshadow
    Thanks for the feedback! I’ve been pondering on this. Now I don’t want to go full-on anime and would rather stick to something more naturalistic, but I think you are right.

    I talked about it with friends and we compared the render with the model in the viewport, one of them noted that the iris might be too big while not having the proper falloff with the cornea and that’s what gives off the anime/artificial vibe. Also the camera on the last render render is so close, the lens does distort the features of the face, making it appear both skinnier and with a bigger nose and eyes than what it is.

    Whereas without the shading and lens distorsion both the bone structure of the face and the eyes mesh look physically accurate (for someone with pretty big eyes, but still in the realm of okay).

    So the details cited above are definitely something that is going to change. I also might inflate the eyelids a little bit as they now appear too thin to look real, and I think this also will contribute to reduce the perceived size of the eyes and make it more natural.

    I spent the afternoon checking on casting websites to find that type of feature and yes, there definitely are women with eyes so big they’re a bit scary, and that uncanniness is something I am looking for, albeit finding the exact balance is difficult. I’ll iterate more with a collection of pictures of these, it’s a rare feature, like less than 1% of the actresses and models I found had it, but it exists.

    Just to clarify, I didn’t base her face off Carrie Anne Moss, that was just for the eyebrows and the skin carnation. And again I think I’m not there yet, the skin is still to splotchy and lacks the type of illumination that I’m looking after.

    Thanks again for the feedbacks! It is useful to iterate this way :smile:

  • exitshadow
    Finally did some proper skin weights and bound the hair to the skin.










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