Character looking for feedback

frostloner

Hello, here is the latest model I created, and I'm struggling to pinpoint the issues within it , any help is greatly appreciated

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/DvJyAG

Eric Chadwick

Nice work. A couple things are bothering me, but only a little.

Her eyes seem to be diverging, looking in opposite directions. It might help to make her a bit more cross-eyed, which would be more natural.


There's a good amount of detail in the roughness texturing, except her skin and hair are very bland roughness in comparison to her clothing. Noses and lips and eye areas are usually a bit more glossy than other areas. The lack of gloss detail on skin and hair makes those areas more "flat" than the clothes, causing a bit of a disconnect.



Are you working from a concept? It would help to show that, and nice to add attribution for the concept artist.

frostloner

Thank you for your feedback,

No, I didn't work on a specific concept, it was simply a practice sculpt with some references. Then, I tried to finalize the result.

https://twitter.com/Fr0stloner/status/1736758255630577701