Also think about the narrative for the shot. Well constructed scenes tell a story, they communicate a narrative to the viewer. It's not just "stuff". What happened here? Why did the "photographer" stop at this place and frame the shot from this specific angle and time?
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My first thought is it's pretty dark. I think you need composition (lighting, color, shape) to guide and please the eye. We have some things here that may help: http://wiki.polycount.com/wiki/Concept_Fundamentals#Composition
Also think about the narrative for the shot. Well constructed scenes tell a story, they communicate a narrative to the viewer. It's not just "stuff". What happened here? Why did the "photographer" stop at this place and frame the shot from this specific angle and time?