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3D Realism military radio - from concept - would love feedback

razvandrf
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Hello everyone, I've been working on this model and would love to know what you guys think, where I could improve in the texturing phase. 

Please know that these are not renders, but printscreens from Substance Painter. Thanks!


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  • Eric Chadwick
    This is looking great so far.

    Are you using photo reference? It would help to see your asset side-by-side with some photo reference.

    One thing that stands out to me is the asset lighting is very flat and uninteresting. You could try adding some lights, and using a HDRI for your lighting. Random example, via Google Image search for "military radio model", https://blenderartists.org/t/military-radio/1303324

    The wear and scratches on the model seem generic and not as related to actual human use. I'd suggest checking out photos of real radios with real-world wear and tear, for ideas. For example https://www.ebay.com/itm/304036058073 
  • razvandrf
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    razvandrf polycounter lvl 2
    This is looking great so far.

    Are you using photo reference? It would help to see your asset side-by-side with some photo reference.

    One thing that stands out to me is the asset lighting is very flat and uninteresting. You could try adding some lights, and using a HDRI for your lighting. Random example, via Google Image search for "military radio model", https://blenderartists.org/t/military-radio/1303324

    The wear and scratches on the model seem generic and not as related to actual human use. I'd suggest checking out photos of real radios with real-world wear and tear, for ideas. For example https://www.ebay.com/itm/304036058073 
    Hey Eric! Thank you so much for your feedback! 

    Please ignore the lightning, the photos are directly from the Substance Painter  viewport, they are not renders. I agree it's flat right now. I want to render it in Marmoset. But I can try to make a bigger difference in roughness in the asset. I will check the example that you gave me and inspire from it, thank you!

    Regarding the photo reference, here are some examples: 
  • Flmn
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    Flmn polycounter lvl 7
    You're using stencil font on "bat 06 networking" which obviously cant be used on a screen. Use the one above it.
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