Could you critique this project i made using ue ? - let's help each other

lena000000

I made this shot recently,it was my first time using ue.
I modelled everything in maya,used designer to make the materials,and painter for some assets.
I could really use some help,i definetly see how this needs improvement,but i can't quite pin point what i can work on to make it better.
Any help is greatly appreciated,do you think this is presentable to get an internship in the industry ?
( i am very insecure about my future, i know ehehehe)


Please share your work too,i would love to open a discussion to help everyone.

teodar23

Hey, i would look into the lightmap resolution as i see a lot of artefacts on intersecting surfaces.
If you are unfamiliar with lightmaps i suggest you search a bit for best practices around that, like cutting out geometry that is not visible, etc.
The materials look interesting but there is almost always a sharp transition between them. Look into dithered blends for mesh transitions and vertex painting for blending multiple materials on the same mesh.
Also i cannot comment more on the building as it is quite small in the scene and the screenshots are a bit blurry. Maybe look into high resolution screenshots or at least some mid range shots of the building

lena000000

thank you so much!
I will implement your advice 

lena000000

still working on it,looks a bit better,im learning a lot.Thank you truly !