First personal 3d animation project

Maya_8

Hi everyone! I'm a beginner in 3d animation and I would like to have some feedback. Thanks in advance!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-navfArv0LA

Lukes3D

The base movement is not bad, it just depends on  what your going for.  The movement seems very linear/robotic like. You might want to add some more smoothing. 

Although its a very abstract scene with a skeleton, so rigged/linear motion could work. I made a short film awhile ago that had some dancing skeletons as the credits were rolling, you might want to check it out. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mTLrmS_JOpw&t=114s

The overall animation could be slowed down by maybe 10%. Even for the quick/robotic style you might be going for, it could use some smoothing.