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Hi everyone! I'm a beginner in 3d animation and I would like to have some feedback. Thanks in advance!



  • Lukes3D
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    The base movement is not bad, it just depends on  what your going for.  The movement seems very linear/robotic like. You might want to add some more smoothing. 

    Although its a very abstract scene with a skeleton, so rigged/linear motion could work. I made a short film awhile ago that had some dancing skeletons as the credits were rolling, you might want to check it out. 


    The overall animation could be slowed down by maybe 10%. Even for the quick/robotic style you might be going for, it could use some smoothing.

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