Demon with axe. (Critique, looking for advice)
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Hello.
I have little experience in character creation.
I would be very grateful if you give constructive critique on my model (sketchfab) and on renders that was made.
Below are a few renders and a link to my artstation:
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Kind of reminds me of Lord of Darkness from Legend (1985).
Here's what I think.
About the model:
-The facial features don't line up with the wire frames
-It could be nicer if you used some sort of reference for the face
-I also think the feet are a bit weird looks like a human foot attached to a hoof (but then again fictional anatomy is not my expertise)
-The wings could be troublesome from a gameplay perspective if you cant fold them.
-The axe looks pretty good from what I can see in the renders.
The renders:
-The scenes look too dark in some places and too bright in others
-Something feels a bit off (like its a beginner's work (No offence intended)) but I cant put my finger on it perhaps it is just the lighting but maybe you could try wider focal lengths (86mm,160mm, 200mm etc.) also try some depth of field (though I'm speaking outside of my expertise here again).
I completely agree with the lighting, it needs to be adjusted.
Legs, feet took for the monotaur ref.
Legs / hooves made a little larger, so that it would not look like Cinderella.) And more brutal (Think so).
It s (hooves) strange, but I can’t even imagine how to change it.)