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Feedback for my astronaut concepts!

Hi, it would be great if anone would be able to answer these questions for me.

  1. can you tell she's an astronaut?
  2. which design is your favourite and what do you like about it?
  3. what elements of other designs do you like?
  4. any constructive criticism!

you dont have to anwer all the questions, any thoughts at all are incredibly appreciated!

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  • carvuliero
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    carvuliero hero character

    its she then we have serious problem :) I will never guess from concept alone They all looks similar aka walking ball aquarium try something different and bold

  • Lossijo

    okay, thank you! I will be definately thinking about how I can incoorperate this. Out of the ones I have so far, which one would you say looks the best? I can go from there

  • carvuliero
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    carvuliero hero character

    The one with double circles N7 and heart visor is interesting as element

  • Lossijo

    👍️thank you

  • carvuliero
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    For inspiration or advice you could check Iain Mccaig space mermaid he deals with how to desing ppl/females in space

  • Lossijo

    that's really cool, I'll def be having a look at that!!! Thanks !!!!!

  • Fabi_G
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    Fabi_G high dynamic range

    I like nr 1 and 2: Not overly complex, reads well, not on the nose it's a woman, but subtle. It's a work outfit after all. Builds look atlethic/ like someone who is active. The visor has something of a large eye. The two designs also remind me of stick figures and a bit of deep sea divers. A critique point could be that it's fairly symmetrical, but personally I don't mind. Don't know what's going on with the characters internals and what she does in game. I think that the visuals should be informed by that.

    Good luck.

  • Lossijo

    thank you, this is a great response!! I appreciate it :))

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