Great job at finishing your model. "Finished not Perfect" - Jake Parker
That said, she seems to be suffering from dead eyes, I'd try giving her a different focal point and push those brows/expression a bit more. Her chest looks a little mushy and unatural and the anatomy in this area and the rib cage could be better. Where are her collarbones? Spend some time finding some more reference to nail down this area. Her hair also appears a little wig like and unnatural in terms of it's high volume off the scalp…
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Good job for your first one!!
Hello Cross,
Great job at finishing your model. "Finished not Perfect" - Jake Parker
That said, she seems to be suffering from dead eyes, I'd try giving her a different focal point and push those brows/expression a bit more. Her chest looks a little mushy and unatural and the anatomy in this area and the rib cage could be better. Where are her collarbones? Spend some time finding some more reference to nail down this area. Her hair also appears a little wig like and unnatural in terms of it's high volume off the scalp…
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Id say no, you have to pass final 10% where you make it look good Below are few things that could be improved
Looks great as a first character good job, I agree with the above post paintover. Can push things to improve it but thats up to you of course.