[FINISHED] Scifi Terminal
greentooth
Hello,
I'm looking for feedbacks and critiques on this scifi terminal. There are a few things that I want to improve, and I still have a few shading / normals errors. UI on the screen is not there at this time but it will come. I would appreciate to have feebacks on the global look and feel and texturing. I plan to add this piece to my portfolio and would like to achieve the maximum quality I'm able to.
Thanks a lot !
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Looks good but the main screenshot is a bit small and its a shame because the asset looks very detailed.
Is it trims and tileables + mesh decals?
Thanks ! I will post more screenshot.
It is a unique unwrap and texture, displayed at 2k in game but in 4k for rendering inside marmoset.
Higher res screen shot. I tweaked a little some materials, and added UI elements on screen. I also reworked the presentation. Still a few elements to work on before calling it done.
The model looks really great! I love the texture work. I don't really see anything to critique but one thing i noticed is that the grill at the bottom have edge towards the left and is straight towards the right.
Thank you ! I think it has to be my geometry and also the way I baked the model, my normals makes my normal map stretching at this place. I will correct this.
Nice prop. Lighting is bugging me though, seems overexposed, washed out.
Also would be nice to see breakdowns: normalmap, albedo, roughness, etc.
Thank you ! I added a few things in texturing and cleaned a few others. You are right about lighting I reworked it and hope it feels better. I started to make a few breakdown images from the main viewpoint.
Last render, do you see any last minute adjustements I could do ? I worked on previous feedbacks and hope it feels better now, especially regarding lighting.
To me it looks MUCH better. The contrasts really make a difference. Fantastic job on this, I love it. The only thing I'm not sure about is the background, but that is probably personal preference.
Thanks a lot ! I reworked a little bit the background but it remains mainly the same in the end.
I find some time to finish this project. You can find more images on my artstation : https://www.artstation.com/artwork/xDYgGY
I feel I've achieved a really better result with all your feedbacks so thank you very much for your time and critiques.