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Need Critique for a portfolio piece

Hi everyone, I'm going to be putting together a portfolio for one of my classes at school. I want to rework on one of the models I'm including. It's a model of the Keurig K supreme plus coffee maker. Any critiques are appreciated. Thank you.


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  • sacboi
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    sacboi veteran polycounter

    I'd suggest rethinking your approach, if only for this object, alone.

    Personally the use of procedural mono\chromatic shaders against a black background makes it a challenge to effectively read, at a glance plus the absence of any sort of visual narrative i.e. context

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