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Studying modeling for 2 months.

Made this work in maya.

I would be very grateful for the feedback and questions

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  • Cibo
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    Cibo polycounter lvl 10

    Modelling Quality looks good except the chains, They are too "cheap" when on the other side you show detailed rivets on other parts.

    From a artstyle perspective it looks like modeling without reference or a big picture in mind. Its a little to generic like am noname scifi tank.

  • SgtHK
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    Perhaps by "chains" you mean the tank tracks?

    And I agree the tracks could use a bit more work. You should model their individual joints to show how they're attached to each other. It's gonna take a bit more work but the modeling realism would improve, even on a sci-fi design.

  • limenal

    Thanks for the feedback, i undresood main mistakes and will try to avoid them in the future

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