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[WIP] Lion Fountain (Looking for critique)

YanisaB
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YanisaB polycounter lvl 2
Hello Polycount community. This is my very first post!

Recently I wanted to start a small project, for portfolio perhaps. 
But for now I don't want to waste energy any further, until if I get some feedback or critique on the progress (That would be help me a lot)

Style: My goal for the style is like this one: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/wZAy5 

Overall my main goal was making a 3D game assets for this project.   

Thank you for your time!


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  • smealer
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    smealer polycounter lvl 4
    Well it's looking great, but I believe you need to give it more character.  I do see some cracks but I think you need to up that by 10 fold. Have maybe a broken piece in the ground. Is it still being used? Or is there over growth of plants taking it over? Just thoughts that maybe will help!
  • KatharinaSuhany
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    KatharinaSuhany polycounter lvl 4
    I agree with all the thigs said above - I would also consider making the lions a bit bigger. 
    If you look for example at the raven skull decore thingy it almost fills out the entire space, same as with the shark and the dagger. 
    But otherwise good job so far :)
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