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Hi everyone!
Some jerrycans for showcase
Metal one has 3,750 triangles and the plastic one 1,092.
Critique appreciated.




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  • Kanni3d
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    Kanni3d sublime tool
    Nice textures and lighting. I'd say the red jerry can could use some "plastic" wear, seeing as it's quite a grungey asset. Just some scuffing/edge highlights of bright red/faint white of points of contact to show where the hard plastic gets scraped from being on the floor etc.
  • ducklover
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    Kanni3d said:
    Nice textures and lighting. I'd say the red jerry can could use some "plastic" wear, seeing as it's quite a grungey asset. Just some scuffing/edge highlights of bright red/faint white of points of contact to show where the hard plastic gets scraped from being on the floor etc.
    Yeah, completely agree. I was too fast with this one, more wear definitely needed. It's kinda plain right now. Thank you!
  • sacboi
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    sacboi polycount lvl 666
    Just for future reference.

    Recognizing the metal one by the side strengthening and expansion indentation pattern as vintage military surplus circa: 1950s so personally would've been nice too have seen slight deformation (denting) alongside flaking paint that I don't often see attempted these days. 
  • ducklover
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    Actually, there are some dents, but they are subtle/small.
    Though good advice, thank you!
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