HORUS - The Egyptian God - Game ready character

Aika2033

Hello everyone!
This is my personal work done in 2 months for the Rookies Awards 2021 contest. I learned so much by this time and i improved my skills and my workflow.
This is a game ready model with 70.6k polygons based on fantastic Concept of Gianluca Rolli!
If you want to check the complete breakdown of the entire process check please my ArtStation---> https://www.artstation.com/artwork/PoRZPy
I appreciate any feedback from you people!

Ashervisalis

Yo, looks cool. I think your lighting could vastly improve, it's suuuuper dark at the moment.

Aika2033

Okey thank you for the tip! It was on purpose that there is no much light but i will improve my lightning! 

ElyesBens

This is looking great model and texturing-wise but i have to agree with @Ashervisalis
on the lighting , you should highlight your model's shapes and volumes , maybe check a tutorial on how to light a character 
i've seen this one a while ago it's quite interesting : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nn23PAOkldM

kanga

There isnt much of a clue as to what is going on with the head. In the first shot it looks like a blob.

Aika2033

kanga said:

There isnt much of a clue as to what is going on with the head. In the first shot it looks like a blob.

I don't know maybe the focal lenght of the camera but i 've checked it... I've put like 60mm that i saw on internet is a good value of a full character render

Aika2033

ElyesBens said:

This is looking great model and texturing-wise but i have to agree with @Ashervisalis
on the lighting , you should highlight your model's shapes and volumes , maybe check a tutorial on how to light a character 
i've seen this one a while ago it's quite interesting : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nn23PAOkldM

I will check it for sure! I definitely need to improve with lightning, i'm still a newbie about this one, thank you!