Fantasy gothic environment

coolmannyo

Hi guys,

I would like to share my latest work with you. I hope I can get some helpful feedback! Thanks in advance!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jx519kv8Fe4

PolyHertz

Interesting structure. I feel like the scene needs more ambient light though as the shadows seem a bit too harsh atm. The vine leaves could also use some subsurface scattering. For the bricks, the wear seems oddly uniform on each (dirty flat sides, rims with white edge wear), but as if you wanted to show long term damage/wear it should mostly only be from the top where rain would hit them while grime and mold would grow underneath.

coolmannyo

PolyHertz said:

Interesting structure. I feel like the scene needs more ambient light though as the shadows seem a bit too harsh atm. The vine leaves could also use some subsurface scattering. For the bricks, the wear seems oddly uniform on each (dirty flat sides, rims with white edge wear), but as if you wanted to show long term damage/wear it should mostly only be from the top where rain would hit them while grime and mold would grow underneath.

Thanks alot for your critique! It was very helpful for me!