[WIP] Remington 870 shotgun, Feedback needed

SebasWong

Hello everybody!

This is my first time posting in this forum so I want to introduce myself, I'm a self-taught 3D artist from Peru, I would say I'm a beginner because I've been modeling for over 7 months now, mostly learning through tutorials and after making a lot of small and low poly props I've decided to challenge myself to make a 3D game model of the Remington 870 shotgun.

I'm gonna be posting my progress through the week and all feedback & criticism would be really appreciated
Main reference I use ( i have a Pure Ref scene with other references but I can't post the image :c ) : 

BlockOut Screenshots:




Blockout Redefined: I change some things of the initial block out to make the process of the high poly easier.  I change some proportions and add some small details.

Ashervisalis

Looks cool so far

ElyesBens

Hi @SebasWong , this looks really good for a start ! 
You could refine this part though, the width and the shape overall are a bit off.

sacboi

Coming along.

Though imo the top longitudinal/horizontal segment count of both stock & receiver are slightly low poly for FPV up close, so might pay to cut an extra two edge loops to fix that.

SebasWong

Thank you so much for all the feedback!
Sorry for the late response, I'm only able to work in this model on the weekends because of my job. This is how is going so far: 

I refine the overall shape of the trigger and put some extra geometry to make it more round.



I placed two extra edge loops on the top of the stock/receiver to make it more round.

Model without wireframe:


I will continue improving the model, thanks for all the feedback you have given me so far!