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SuSo polycounter lvl 5
Hi everyone!
I was working in an environment with quixel assets to practise lighting and composition.

I would like to get some feedback to try to improve it.


Thanks a lot!

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  • Ashervisalis
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    Ashervisalis grand marshal polycounter
    I'm just gonna touch on the scene composition since you were using pre-made assets! I think your ground is far too flat and perfect. The birds in the background are far too faint I think, and not white enough to stand out. The tree is behind a pile of rocks, so just seeing the top half of the closest tree doesn't really bode all that great. I think your fog is blurring everything. The ruins in the distance are really hard to make out. I think if you scaled the ruins up and brought the dude closer to the camera, it would read a lot better.
  • SuSo
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    SuSo polycounter lvl 5
    Understood! I will try to do the things that you told me

    Thanks ash! ;)
  • SuSo
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    SuSo polycounter lvl 5
    I just updated


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