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Some feedback for Forest Snow

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Hi guys, i would like to get some feedback to improve the environment that i'm creanting.

The main idea is that there is a lake connected with a river that is flowing into the forest to the far mountain.

Thanks!


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  • JamesBrisnehan
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    Looks pretty good to me. The only things that stand out to me is one floating rock on the left, and maybe there could be less snow directly under the trees. 
    Oh also the fade-out of the snow on the frozen lake looks a little too gradient-y. I think a harder edge and higher contrast between the two materials would look better. Also a bit of a raised edge on the snow (from the height map or normal) would look cool. And I think the frozen lake texture could stand to be a little less glossy, and a little more frosty.
  • SuSo
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    Hi James!
    Thanks for the feedback, im going to do the things that you said, i'm agree with that things

    Thanks a lot! :)
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