Mansion Environment Critique

scoob · Jan 2021

Somehow I am just now discovering Polycount, but I'm glad to be here and join the community. This is one of my main pieces to my portfolio. I would love to hear any and all thoughts on this environment.
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teodar23 · Feb 2021

Welcome!
My main issue here is the scale of the wall pattern and the floorboards. They look twice as large compared to the rest of the enviro.
Also the dust layer is inconsistent. Some assets have it while others dont. The couch looks very dusty for example but the floor does not.
Like the idea though.

scoob · Feb 2021

Nice that's something I definitely needed to hear! The pattern size being too big is something that I needed an extra pair of eyes for. And yeah the dust was just something that I hoped wouldn't be too obvious. It was my first time making master materials, but with what I know now I could probably easily fix that.

Mansion Environment Critique

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