Looking for portfolio critique - Concept art

MeritxellG

Hi, I'm new here.
I'd love to have some feedback on my portfolio as I'm looking to get into the video game industry. I'm 20 years old and currently trying to get my first job as a character concept artist. 
This portfolio is an ongoing project that I try to update regularly. Here is the link: https://www.artstation.com/meritxellgeorges
Thanks to anyone who is willing to help me! 

carvuliero

You can scrap everything but fan art and start thinking about new ideas ,on second though you should fix his arms first

I suggest to make a collages of your work and analyse it see what works what not ... there are more not

For character concept art you should do front back close ups accessories and bunch of variations for painting/illustration 3/4 usually work best so push yourself it will pay of , drawing/painting 5-10 hours a day wont be bad idea