[Complete] Axzoor Ruins

Fatcows · Jan 2021

Hello, I'm looking for some critique on this piece I am working on which is based on this concept art.
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/XnDx4L

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Thanks for looking.

Fjordreig · Jan 2021

It looks like a great piece of work. It might be worth working on the lighting, and without such a bright blue sky as in the original, ur work looks darker in terms of mood. Good job

PS Also u use dithering for side stones?

Fatcows · Jan 2021

Thanks for the feedback! I am working on the lighting again as I noticed this as well. Lighting as always been a trouble for me. I am using dithering on the side stones, but I think I needed to increase the dither levels. I didn't notice that until you pointed it out. Thanks again!

Ashervisalis · Jan 2021

Yeah lighting needs a little work. Would be nice if the pathway was lit, helping guide the eye.

Fatcows · Jan 2021

Some updated images

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Fatcows · Jan 2021

The landscape needs a lot of work and the texturing of the buildings.

Fatcows · Jan 2021

Hello! Although I'm not fully happy with some aspects of this piece mainly the terrain and the textures on the centerpiece, I had to just call it for now as it was taking quite some time and I think I needed to take all the things I was not happy with and try to focus my learning on them on my spare time instead.

Fatcows · Jan 2021

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/J985NZ

[Complete] Axzoor Ruins

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