Mormon / LDS concept art

MacTheKnife

My first ever take at something shareable - hopefully the intention still resonates with people who don't get the cultural/religious references!  Made in Blender, rendered w/ LuxCore.  Have a ton to learn, feedback and criticism totally welcome and appreciated.

Jacob Lubinski

I like! Don't thing there's much to crit. Maybe it's a little too clean?

Ashervisalis

My 2 cents;

- Bevels are too sharp

- Cloth needs a lot of work. It's not really folding with the corners of the table

- Candle seems a little see through. Make it 100% opaque and give it some sub surface scattering?

- Would be interesting if the candle was the only source for warm light and then the fill light was more cool/blue.

- The smoke seems like there is a fire in the building and we need to evacuate.

MacTheKnife

thanks guys!