need a feedback for head sculpt

saba_gsch_cg

hey guys i made my first head from scratch , but it looks a bit weird but i don't know why , i need your feedback thanks

Brian "Panda" Choi

• Nasioabial fold needs better definition
• Masseter muscle defintion is lacking
  
• corners of the mouth need to be poked inwards (towards the back of the head)
  
• Zygomatic Arch is too vertically wide
  
  I would recommend cross referencing between the "bony landmarks of fhe face" and "planes of the face" to build up your medium forms.  And indentifying which muscles contribute to the planes.
  
  Are you referencing a real head reference for this sculpt?

saba_gsch_cg

Brian "Panda" Choi said:

• Nasioabial fold needs better definition
• Masseter muscle defintion is lacking
  
• corners of the mouth need to be poked inwards (towards the back of the head)
  
• Zygomatic Arch is too vertically wide
  
  I would recommend cross referencing between the "bony landmarks of fhe face" and "planes of the face" to build up your medium forms.  And indentifying which muscles contribute to the planes.
  
  Are you referencing a real head reference for this sculpt?

i used no reference , i just follow a tutorial in order to make a random face ,but everyone told me to use reference , for the next one i will apply what you said