Ignore the fact that it's an MLP brony animation, that's not important. I've been animating for about 4, roughly 5 years, and I have always been trying to improve my skills and craft. I never asked for critique before because I always realize what I am lacking in, but at this point, I want outside opinions and thoughts. If you're a critic, If you're a professional, if you're a pupil of James Baxter, critique your heart away. Be as critical as you can be.